The rain pours down,
Red drops from a brilliant red sky.
Each drop reverberates....
Calling all cold-blooded creatures
To come alive.
Slithering snakes....
Copulating Turtles....
Throbbing lizards....
Dead Men.
The drops fall on deserts of dried blood,
Soaking up the evil of ages,
And forming pools of scarlet sins.
Religion,caste,war,sex.....
They all dissolve.
Hearts that had stopped beating
Once more filled with desire.
Ah ! The air so promiscous.....
Ensnares the mind.
It pains....to breathe.
The world celebrates in one big orgy.
The rain dances down,
Red drops from a brilliant red sky.
The Dance Of The Devil!!!!!
4 comments:
ah...
may it rain, for we must live!
what imagery. great man. a small suggestion. try playing with the sounds too. i dont know if i'm coherent, but i surely hope i am!
thanks....will certainly try......
your image of a reddened world smelling rain...awesome.
from hated reptiles to men cold with death...indeed the rain sprinkles on them a frash lease of life.
but, my friend , one doubt remains...what about the beautiful patches of the world,will the rain shine them brighter..or will heavy wetness droop their spirits?
that is my dark "shoronyo".dude,lovely imagery.u must write more often dude,seriously.the stuff is very morrison.have bn reading up stuff on him.it cud make a lovely acid song
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